AG Focus article

[Thomas D. Uram]

I agree.  Well done.

Ivan R. Judson wrote:
> This looks very good.
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> --Ivan 
> 
> 
>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: Susanne Lefvert [mailto:lefvert at mcs.anl.gov] 
>>Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2004 12:47 PM
>>To: Ivan R. Judson
>>Cc: 'Thomas D. Uram'; ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
>>Subject: RE: AG Focus article
>>
>>
>>Thank you for your comments. I added an introduction with 
>>general overview and some examples. The last paragraph got 
>>removed and I instead finish the article by describing how 
>>one example is handled by the system. Feel free to give more comments.
>>
>>Thanks,
>>
>>Susanne
>>
>>
>>On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ivan R. Judson wrote:
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>>
>>>After a bit of time to think about it, I think what I feel 
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>>is missing 
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>>>is a paragraph (#3) that describes the system broadly. The 
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>>following 
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>>>text and a detailed explanation of the components is very 
>>
>>nice, but I 
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>>>think an introductory paragraph that lists these parts 
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>>would be helpful.
>>
>>>Additionally, a conclusion that describes the examples, how 
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>>they are 
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>>>used, and perhaps how the middleware solves the problem 
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>>posed at the 
>>
>>>beginning would be useful. it could replace the existing final 
>>>paragraph if room were tight.
>>>
>>>--Ivan
>>>
>>>
>>>>-----Original Message-----
>>>>From: owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
>>>>[mailto:owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov] On Behalf Of Thomas D. Uram
>>>>Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 2004 10:55 AM
>>>>To: Susanne Lefvert
>>>>Cc: ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
>>>>Subject: Re: AG Focus article
>>>>
>>>>I think the article is very well written and gives a good 
>>
>>overview 
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>>>>of the concept and components.  The only addition I would 
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>>make is to 
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>>>>mention a couple network service examples, to give a 
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>>grounding for 
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>>>>what we have in mind for network services, and get other people 
>>>>thinking about network services they could develop.
>>>>
>>>>Other persons on ag-dev should also send comments, sooner rather 
>>>>than later.
>>>>
>>>>Tom
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>Susanne Lefvert wrote:
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>>>>>Tom,
>>>>>
>>>>>Attached is a first cut of the AG Focus article, feel 
>>
>>free to give 
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>>>>>comments and suggestions.
>>>>>
>>>>>Cheers,
>>>>>
>>>>>Susanne
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>On Tue, 7 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>>Susanne:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>Could you write an article for the next AG Focus giving an
>>>>
>>>>overview of
>>>>
>>>>>>network services in the 2.3 release?  This would be a good
>>>>
>>>>opportunity
>>>>
>>>>>>to try to engage people in thinking about them, maybe
>>>>
>>>>developing them,
>>>>
>>>>>>and generating ideas that will affect the work we do 
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>>for network 
>>
>>>>>>services during the 3.0 cycle.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>You can look at previous AG focus articles here, to get 
>>
>>an idea of 
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>>>>>>length and content:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>  http://www.accessgrid.org/community/agfocus.html
>>>>>>
>>>>>>If you could send it to the group for comment by the end of
>>>>
>>>>the week,
>>>>
>>>>>>that'd be great.  If you have any questions before then,
>>>>
>>>>let me know.
>>>>
>>>>>>Thanks,
>>>>>>
>>>>>>Tom
>>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
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