AG Focus article

[Ivan R. Judson]

This looks very good.

--Ivan 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Susanne Lefvert [mailto:lefvert at mcs.anl.gov] 
> Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2004 12:47 PM
> To: Ivan R. Judson
> Cc: 'Thomas D. Uram'; ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> Subject: RE: AG Focus article
> 
> 
> Thank you for your comments. I added an introduction with 
> general overview and some examples. The last paragraph got 
> removed and I instead finish the article by describing how 
> one example is handled by the system. Feel free to give more comments.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Susanne
> 
> 
> On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ivan R. Judson wrote:
> 
> > 
> > After a bit of time to think about it, I think what I feel 
> is missing 
> > is a paragraph (#3) that describes the system broadly. The 
> following 
> > text and a detailed explanation of the components is very 
> nice, but I 
> > think an introductory paragraph that lists these parts 
> would be helpful.
> > 
> > Additionally, a conclusion that describes the examples, how 
> they are 
> > used, and perhaps how the middleware solves the problem 
> posed at the 
> > beginning would be useful. it could replace the existing final 
> > paragraph if room were tight.
> > 
> > --Ivan
> > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> > > [mailto:owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov] On Behalf Of Thomas D. Uram
> > > Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 2004 10:55 AM
> > > To: Susanne Lefvert
> > > Cc: ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> > > Subject: Re: AG Focus article
> > > 
> > > I think the article is very well written and gives a good 
> overview 
> > > of the concept and components.  The only addition I would 
> make is to 
> > > mention a couple network service examples, to give a 
> grounding for 
> > > what we have in mind for network services, and get other people 
> > > thinking about network services they could develop.
> > > 
> > > Other persons on ag-dev should also send comments, sooner rather 
> > > than later.
> > > 
> > > Tom
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Susanne Lefvert wrote:
> > > > Tom,
> > > > 
> > > > Attached is a first cut of the AG Focus article, feel 
> free to give 
> > > > comments and suggestions.
> > > > 
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > 
> > > > Susanne
> > > > 
> > > > 
> > > > On Tue, 7 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:
> > > > 
> > > > 
> > > >>Susanne:
> > > >>
> > > >>Could you write an article for the next AG Focus giving an
> > > overview of
> > > >>network services in the 2.3 release?  This would be a good
> > > opportunity
> > > >>to try to engage people in thinking about them, maybe
> > > developing them,
> > > >>and generating ideas that will affect the work we do 
> for network 
> > > >>services during the 3.0 cycle.
> > > >>
> > > >>You can look at previous AG focus articles here, to get 
> an idea of 
> > > >>length and content:
> > > >>
> > > >>   http://www.accessgrid.org/community/agfocus.html
> > > >>
> > > >>If you could send it to the group for comment by the end of
> > > the week,
> > > >>that'd be great.  If you have any questions before then,
> > > let me know.
> > > >>
> > > >>Thanks,
> > > >>
> > > >>Tom
> > > >>
> > > 
> > > 
> > 
> > 
>