AG Focus article

[Susanne Lefvert]

Thanks :)


On Thu, 16 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:

> I agree.  Well done.
> 
> Ivan R. Judson wrote:
> > This looks very good.
> > 
> > --Ivan 
> > 
> > 
> >>-----Original Message-----
> >>From: Susanne Lefvert [mailto:lefvert at mcs.anl.gov] 
> >>Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2004 12:47 PM
> >>To: Ivan R. Judson
> >>Cc: 'Thomas D. Uram'; ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> >>Subject: RE: AG Focus article
> >>
> >>
> >>Thank you for your comments. I added an introduction with 
> >>general overview and some examples. The last paragraph got 
> >>removed and I instead finish the article by describing how 
> >>one example is handled by the system. Feel free to give more comments.
> >>
> >>Thanks,
> >>
> >>Susanne
> >>
> >>
> >>On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ivan R. Judson wrote:
> >>
> >>
> >>>After a bit of time to think about it, I think what I feel 
> >>
> >>is missing 
> >>
> >>>is a paragraph (#3) that describes the system broadly. The 
> >>
> >>following 
> >>
> >>>text and a detailed explanation of the components is very 
> >>
> >>nice, but I 
> >>
> >>>think an introductory paragraph that lists these parts 
> >>
> >>would be helpful.
> >>
> >>>Additionally, a conclusion that describes the examples, how 
> >>
> >>they are 
> >>
> >>>used, and perhaps how the middleware solves the problem 
> >>
> >>posed at the 
> >>
> >>>beginning would be useful. it could replace the existing final 
> >>>paragraph if room were tight.
> >>>
> >>>--Ivan
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>>-----Original Message-----
> >>>>From: owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> >>>>[mailto:owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov] On Behalf Of Thomas D. Uram
> >>>>Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 2004 10:55 AM
> >>>>To: Susanne Lefvert
> >>>>Cc: ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> >>>>Subject: Re: AG Focus article
> >>>>
> >>>>I think the article is very well written and gives a good 
> >>
> >>overview 
> >>
> >>>>of the concept and components.  The only addition I would 
> >>
> >>make is to 
> >>
> >>>>mention a couple network service examples, to give a 
> >>
> >>grounding for 
> >>
> >>>>what we have in mind for network services, and get other people 
> >>>>thinking about network services they could develop.
> >>>>
> >>>>Other persons on ag-dev should also send comments, sooner rather 
> >>>>than later.
> >>>>
> >>>>Tom
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>Susanne Lefvert wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>>>Tom,
> >>>>>
> >>>>>Attached is a first cut of the AG Focus article, feel 
> >>
> >>free to give 
> >>
> >>>>>comments and suggestions.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>Cheers,
> >>>>>
> >>>>>Susanne
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>On Tue, 7 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>>Susanne:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>Could you write an article for the next AG Focus giving an
> >>>>
> >>>>overview of
> >>>>
> >>>>>>network services in the 2.3 release?  This would be a good
> >>>>
> >>>>opportunity
> >>>>
> >>>>>>to try to engage people in thinking about them, maybe
> >>>>
> >>>>developing them,
> >>>>
> >>>>>>and generating ideas that will affect the work we do 
> >>
> >>for network 
> >>
> >>>>>>services during the 3.0 cycle.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>You can look at previous AG focus articles here, to get 
> >>
> >>an idea of 
> >>
> >>>>>>length and content:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  http://www.accessgrid.org/community/agfocus.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>If you could send it to the group for comment by the end of
> >>>>
> >>>>the week,
> >>>>
> >>>>>>that'd be great.  If you have any questions before then,
> >>>>
> >>>>let me know.
> >>>>
> >>>>>>Thanks,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>Tom
> >>>>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>
> > 
> > 
> 
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