AG Focus article

[Susanne Lefvert]

Thank you for your comments. I added an introduction with general overview
and some examples. The last paragraph got removed and I instead finish
the article by describing how one example is handled by the system. Feel
free to give more comments.

Thanks,

Susanne


On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ivan R. Judson wrote:

> 
> After a bit of time to think about it, I think what I feel is missing is a
> paragraph (#3) that describes the system broadly. The following text and a
> detailed explanation of the components is very nice, but I think an
> introductory paragraph that lists these parts would be helpful.
> 
> Additionally, a conclusion that describes the examples, how they are used,
> and perhaps how the middleware solves the problem posed at the beginning
> would be useful. it could replace the existing final paragraph if room were
> tight.
> 
> --Ivan 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov 
> > [mailto:owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov] On Behalf Of Thomas D. Uram
> > Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 2004 10:55 AM
> > To: Susanne Lefvert
> > Cc: ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> > Subject: Re: AG Focus article
> > 
> > I think the article is very well written and gives a good 
> > overview of the concept and components.  The only addition I 
> > would make is to mention a couple network service examples, 
> > to give a grounding for what we have in mind for network 
> > services, and get other people thinking about network 
> > services they could develop.
> > 
> > Other persons on ag-dev should also send comments, sooner 
> > rather than later.
> > 
> > Tom
> > 
> > 
> > Susanne Lefvert wrote:
> > > Tom,
> > > 
> > > Attached is a first cut of the AG Focus article, feel free to give 
> > > comments and suggestions.
> > > 
> > > Cheers,
> > > 
> > > Susanne
> > > 
> > > 
> > > On Tue, 7 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:
> > > 
> > > 
> > >>Susanne:
> > >>
> > >>Could you write an article for the next AG Focus giving an 
> > overview of 
> > >>network services in the 2.3 release?  This would be a good 
> > opportunity 
> > >>to try to engage people in thinking about them, maybe 
> > developing them, 
> > >>and generating ideas that will affect the work we do for network 
> > >>services during the 3.0 cycle.
> > >>
> > >>You can look at previous AG focus articles here, to get an idea of 
> > >>length and content:
> > >>
> > >>   http://www.accessgrid.org/community/agfocus.html
> > >>
> > >>If you could send it to the group for comment by the end of 
> > the week, 
> > >>that'd be great.  If you have any questions before then, 
> > let me know.
> > >>
> > >>Thanks,
> > >>
> > >>Tom
> > >>
> > 
> > 
> 
> 
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