[Swift-commit] r7665 - SwiftApps/cloud

[ketan at ci.uchicago.edu]

Author: ketan
Date: 2014-03-09 16:27:49 -0500 (Sun, 09 Mar 2014)
New Revision: 7665

Modified:
   SwiftApps/cloud/README
   SwiftApps/cloud/docbuild
Log:
README improvements

Modified: SwiftApps/cloud/README
===================================================================
--- SwiftApps/cloud/README	2014-03-09 19:15:53 UTC (rev 7664)
+++ SwiftApps/cloud/README	2014-03-09 21:27:49 UTC (rev 7665)
@@ -4,17 +4,20 @@
 Introduction
 ------------
 
-This README describes how you can set the http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/[Amazon] cloud
+This document describes how to set the http://aws.amazon.com/ec2/[Amazon] cloud
 resources to run applications via http://swift-lang.org/main/[Swift] along with
-its
+Swift's
 http://swift-lang.org/guides/release-0.94/userguide/userguide.html#_coasters[coaster-service].
-With the provisioning utilities packaged and described here you can
-add/remove/monitor resources on a current application run.
+The current package contains utilities to configure, add, remove and monitor
+cloud resources to a Swift execution.  add/remove/monitor resources on a
+current application ru.
 
 EC2 setup
 ----------
 
-Installation and setup of EC2 commandline tools is assumed. If you do not have
+For the purpose of this tutorial, installation and setup of EC2 commandline
+tools API is assumed. In other words, EC2 commands such as `ec2-run-instances`,
+`ec2kill`, etc must be available in your environment.  If you do not have
 already, find instructions for setting the EC2 CLI API from
 http://docs.aws.amazon.com/AWSEC2/latest/UserGuide/SettingUp_CommandLine.html[here].
 

Modified: SwiftApps/cloud/docbuild
===================================================================
--- SwiftApps/cloud/docbuild	2014-03-09 19:15:53 UTC (rev 7664)
+++ SwiftApps/cloud/docbuild	2014-03-09 21:27:49 UTC (rev 7665)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 if [ -z $1 ] ; then
 
-    asciidoc -a toc -a toclevels=2  -a max-width=750px  -a textwidth=80 -o /home/ketan/public_html/swiftcloudprovision.html README
+    asciidoc -a toc -a toclevels=2  -a max-width=750px  -a textwidth=80 -o /home/$(whoami)/public_html/swiftcloudprovision.html README
 else
     asciidoc -a toc -a toclevels=2  -a max-width=750px  -a textwidth=80 -o "$1" README
 fi