[Swift-commit] r5500 - trunk/docs/siteguide

[ketan at ci.uchicago.edu]

Author: ketan
Date: 2012-01-17 11:17:08 -0600 (Tue, 17 Jan 2012)
New Revision: 5500

Modified:
   trunk/docs/siteguide/grid
Log:
siteguide refinements

Modified: trunk/docs/siteguide/grid
===================================================================
--- trunk/docs/siteguide/grid	2012-01-17 16:53:00 UTC (rev 5499)
+++ trunk/docs/siteguide/grid	2012-01-17 17:17:08 UTC (rev 5500)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 *For OSG*: Obtain a DOEGrids certificate and register the certificate in
-the OSG "Engage" VO following the procedures at:
+the OSG "Engage" VO following the procedure at:
 
 https://twiki.grid.iu.edu/bin/view/Engagement/EngageNewUserGuide
 
@@ -91,14 +91,14 @@
 $ voms-proxy-init --voms Engage -hours 48
 ----
 
-To run jobs using the procedures documented here you need to be logged
+To run jobs using the procedure described here, you need to be logged
 in to a "submit host" on which you will run Swift and other
-grid-related utilities. This can be any host with the OSG client stack
-or equivalent tools installed. Such hosts include the OSG Engage
-submit host, and the two Swift lab servers
+grid-related utilities. A submit host is any host where the OSG client stack
+or equivalent tools are installed. Such hosts include the OSG Engage
+submit host (engage-submit3.renci.org), and the two Swift lab servers
 {bridled,communicado}.ci.uchicago.edu.
 
-Obtain a login on engage-submit.renci.org following instructions on
+Obtain a login on engage-submit3.renci.org following instructions on
 the OSG URL above.
 
 Obtain a CI login with access to the Swift lab servers by requesting