[Swift-commit] r3819 - text/parco10submission

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Author: dsk
Date: 2010-12-22 10:03:09 -0600 (Wed, 22 Dec 2010)
New Revision: 3819

Modified:
   text/parco10submission/paper.tex
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Modified: text/parco10submission/paper.tex
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--- text/parco10submission/paper.tex	2010-12-22 15:02:23 UTC (rev 3818)
+++ text/parco10submission/paper.tex	2010-12-22 16:03:09 UTC (rev 3819)
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 Swift's contribution and primary value is that it provides a simple,
 minimal set of language constructs to specify how applications are
 glued together at large scale in a simple compact form, while keeping
-the language simple and elegant, and minimizing any overlap with the
+the language simple \katznote{second ``simple'' in this sentence...} and elegant, and minimizing any overlap with the
 tasks that existing scripting languages do well. Swift regularizes and
 abstracts notions of external data and processes for distributed
 parallel execution of application programs. Applications expressed in
@@ -964,8 +964,8 @@
 Grid (OSG)~\cite{OSG_2007}, where the set of sites that may be used is
 large and changing. It is impractical to maintain a site catalog by
 hand in this situation. In collaboration with the OSG Engagement
-group, Swift has been interfaced to ReSS~\cite{ReSS_2007} \katznote{say what ReSS is}
-so that the site
+group, Swift has been interfaced to ReSS~\cite{ReSS_2007},
+an OSG resource selection service, so that the site
 catalog is generated from that information system. This provides a
 very straightforward way to generate a large catalog of sites.