AG Focus article
Ivan R. Judson
judson at mcs.anl.gov
Thu Sep 16 13:16:04 CDT 2004
This looks very good.
--Ivan
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Susanne Lefvert [mailto:lefvert at mcs.anl.gov]
> Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2004 12:47 PM
> To: Ivan R. Judson
> Cc: 'Thomas D. Uram'; ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> Subject: RE: AG Focus article
>
>
> Thank you for your comments. I added an introduction with
> general overview and some examples. The last paragraph got
> removed and I instead finish the article by describing how
> one example is handled by the system. Feel free to give more comments.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Susanne
>
>
> On Tue, 14 Sep 2004, Ivan R. Judson wrote:
>
> >
> > After a bit of time to think about it, I think what I feel
> is missing
> > is a paragraph (#3) that describes the system broadly. The
> following
> > text and a detailed explanation of the components is very
> nice, but I
> > think an introductory paragraph that lists these parts
> would be helpful.
> >
> > Additionally, a conclusion that describes the examples, how
> they are
> > used, and perhaps how the middleware solves the problem
> posed at the
> > beginning would be useful. it could replace the existing final
> > paragraph if room were tight.
> >
> > --Ivan
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> > > [mailto:owner-ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov] On Behalf Of Thomas D. Uram
> > > Sent: Tuesday, September 14, 2004 10:55 AM
> > > To: Susanne Lefvert
> > > Cc: ag-dev at mcs.anl.gov
> > > Subject: Re: AG Focus article
> > >
> > > I think the article is very well written and gives a good
> overview
> > > of the concept and components. The only addition I would
> make is to
> > > mention a couple network service examples, to give a
> grounding for
> > > what we have in mind for network services, and get other people
> > > thinking about network services they could develop.
> > >
> > > Other persons on ag-dev should also send comments, sooner rather
> > > than later.
> > >
> > > Tom
> > >
> > >
> > > Susanne Lefvert wrote:
> > > > Tom,
> > > >
> > > > Attached is a first cut of the AG Focus article, feel
> free to give
> > > > comments and suggestions.
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > >
> > > > Susanne
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On Tue, 7 Sep 2004, Thomas D. Uram wrote:
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >>Susanne:
> > > >>
> > > >>Could you write an article for the next AG Focus giving an
> > > overview of
> > > >>network services in the 2.3 release? This would be a good
> > > opportunity
> > > >>to try to engage people in thinking about them, maybe
> > > developing them,
> > > >>and generating ideas that will affect the work we do
> for network
> > > >>services during the 3.0 cycle.
> > > >>
> > > >>You can look at previous AG focus articles here, to get
> an idea of
> > > >>length and content:
> > > >>
> > > >> http://www.accessgrid.org/community/agfocus.html
> > > >>
> > > >>If you could send it to the group for comment by the end of
> > > the week,
> > > >>that'd be great. If you have any questions before then,
> > > let me know.
> > > >>
> > > >>Thanks,
> > > >>
> > > >>Tom
> > > >>
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
>
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